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Wednesday, November 17, 2010

A Poem for Miss Hancock


Miss Hancock was Forest



Miss Hancock was forest
She was decorated with flowers and leaves from beautiful trees
It was wide enough to let everyone in
Wide enough to let the kids disrespecting her inside
                      
She looked strong outside
It was covered with bushes 
With flamboyant clothings which my mom looked down to

I did not know there was an empty lot deep inside
Too empty too lonely
It needed people visiting
It needed joy and happiness
It needed to be filled

I should have known

Now the forest is gone
It is now too late to visit

I miss the trees
I miss the echoes
I miss Miss Hancock

1 comment:

  1. Nice poem. I especially thought the use of repetition at the end was effective.

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